>>3598
>webcomic
Whaaaaat
You sure you're not thinking of his recent fanart for Crave-the-Bullet?

It's about making girls softer and plumper than a thousand pillows. And then documenting them.

Can I see the card, Miss? There should be a pattern of dots in the corner that says what department you're being referred to. :)

last for today

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What was in those pills I took last night?

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Don't mind me, just experimenting with a couple different styles...

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>>2313
Team KD representing

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Boy was this thread a letdown. I'd kill for a chance to have Woot bouncing off my ideas like this and KD can't be bothered? >.>;

Nerd will always win.

My vote's for nerd.

Skunk and warthog share a room because they are both stinkers. I might colour it.

I really suck at drawing BBWs (probably should've thought about that before even making this thread) so this is some practice. This is also probably the closest I'll ever do to "slob" art.

>>3084
i like it more like this plz. the legs seem odd thought maybe bit off i direction wise.

>>3084


Juri's right hand seems like it isn't connected to a wrist. It looks like a prop hand just sitting on Makoto's knee. Juri's head also seems to be too far away from a perspective point. It seems tinier than it should be for this pose. I am assuming that she is supposed to be sniffing Makoto's armpit, and if that is the case, her head is way too small.


Makoto's left hand not being visible at all irks me. I understand she is using it to balance herself on the ground, but her foot completely blocks it, making it look like it just disappears.

Her squatting pose is also.... funky. Her ass would not be pointing straight down like that. It would be angled out. I would suggest looking at reference pictures of people doing squats to see a more natural pose.

Finally, the direction her right arm is leaning in also comes across to me as unnatural. Put your arm up in the air like that while you lean to the opposite direction. Now lean all together in the same direction. It feels more natural when you lean together, doesn't it?


Sorry if that's way too much or more than you really wanted. I truly enjoy your work and hope you keep on doing what you are doing.

>>3092
nah, that's actually great. I've just been too busy with other stuff to post in here

>>3021
That was the problem with the last thread; no. When the only effect criticism is that the artist can't draw worth a damn, and they need to practice more, it's not a good place for discussion. Frankly, OP was warned.

Loomis

>>3022
Pretty much.

Honestly, they were stepping in it by not keeping this stuff in one thread because, yeah, this is just objectively bad.

Throwing some MSPaint background on it is not fixing fundamental problems.

Hey, hows your work doing? did you get your tablet repaired?

>>2939

naw, but I've been messing around with pencil, drawing people, etc. Once I'm relatively comfortable to start posting again (and have tablet up and running again), I will.

>>2942

crap I keep messing up in this box but yea, it is me.

I might do more of these. If I do, I'll try to merge this BBW-theme with my other fetishes (like force feeding, tentacles and mind control...) We'll see

btw, sorry if my English is bad. It's not my native language

By all means, please stay.

>>2898
"he had a dick this big."

It's okay, but the expression and position she's in was just asking for it.

Wellllp. The shoulders are not at all aligned, the neck is very long. There appear to be...4 breasts? and the face seems to be painted on. Amongst other things. Lots of room for improvement.

>>2890
Well it's more that this is really not particularly, uh, good and I don't see much point in ripping the shit out of someone as we are oft wont to do.

It just seems unnecessary on someone's first attempt.

>>2890

It's more the fact that for a pic like this, the answer to "What's wrong with it?" is "Practically everything." And, you know, it's not the guy's fault, it's just one of those things where the best critique possible is "Practice every day for a year then try asking again." He's just not at a skill level yet where individual critiques apply.